WRITING

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this is mine and jontys story that we wrote it is a true story and writing about our season last year but we have changed the teams and everything ENJOY!

 As far as I can remember rugby was my life, I loved watching it, listening to it, talking about it but most of all I liked playing it.

Saturday the 6th May 2011

This Saturday we were up against St Paul's collegiate. I slipped on the number ten jersey and tied up my boots. We ran onto the field, the ref blew his whistle and it was on. The conditions today were not ideal and right from the start it was a scramble for possession. Our first touch on the ball was probably our best of the game. The halfback scooped it out of the ruck and flicked it beautifully. The ball found my hands and I spotted a gap, I stepped their fullback with ease and dived over, right under the sticks. I converted my own try. After the try we managed two penalties. We decided to take the points both times. The game was untidy right through. So in the end the score was 13-0 not the best result.

Wednesday the 10th May 2011

At practise our star flanker Ricky (our captain) got a concussion and is out for a week.

Saturday the 13 May 2011

This week it was Kura College they were big extremely big but our coach just told as to “tackle round the ankles, the bigger they are the harder they fall”. We jogged onto the field nervously, but about 15 minutes into the game we realized they had no speed and we ran right round them the whole game. I managed to run in two of our 9 tries and kicked 10/12 we won 54-17

Saturday the 20th May 2011

This week we had a big challenge. We were facing Kings college. They were just like us, undefeated. This week I had been changed to no.13 which is centre as we had our star player James Savea back in no.10. We have had a few changes made this week our flankers have changed because Ricky’s still not up to the job. As I tied up my shiny new white and red adidas f50s just like all blacks star centre sonny bill's boots, our coach marty berry walks in to tell us that it’s time to go. We run out onto the field, the ref blows the whistle and the game underway. Then later on 26 minutes into the game chris smith gets a yellow card for punching our players in the ruck. Marty yells come on they’re one player down we kick for touch and win the line out the half back Jonty spreads it to the backs I get the ball and give an inside ball and roccos sprints and dives for the corner the ref calls it a try as we jog it back to half we watch the kick and unfortunately we miss the kick. 1 minute left to go Ash misses his man and he's away he puts a grubber through and it’s a sprint me vs manu we both dive but the ref calls it a no try. Its 5 metre scrum the ref calls last play we win it the pass it to Raniera and its intercepted in our goal line and the fall on the ball and its a try under the posts so its up to their first five to kick the 2 points to win the game, they do. The ref blows the whistle and that is full time, unfortunately King’s college have won.

Saturday 27th of may 2011

5 weeks later we have won all our games so far and its semi final week. We were up against St Pauls collegiate again for our semi final. It was a easy beat the final score was 42 nill.

saturday 2011

its the finals today we are up against kings college = = =this is my 4 picture story and these are the pictures we used.=



It was a nice and sunny day we were of trying to find adventures. I was hiking in the desert with my family and friends. We found a good camps spot it was nice but we thought there's a storm supposed to be coming and when theres a storm the big cats come out. We ended up deciding not to.we walked for hours just trying to find one spot. We looked up theres a storm coming mum said. Dad starts running everybody following evan max and his family everyone's running. Mum says slow down to my dad and he doesn't listen and just keeps running. We all get tired dad doesn't stop running he turns round and say come on it going to rain. He runs behind my family and pushes us to make us run. We ran so did max's family we must of got fitter it was hard i was so unfit. we see one tree and the top of a cliff dad says that's about 60 metres and dad and max’s step dad climbed first because he's the biggest. They drop 40 metre rope down but it was to long they have 2 so they pull it up and tye them together. they drop them down. it was only about 55 metres. Mum says kids first so me and max go first the both mums and when we got up we seen this massive pool of water and 8 trees. Luckly dad bring a saw so he and cut them down and went to the biggest tree and stacked wood up then jammed them together in the tree so they were just about flat then i climb up and stand on it it collapses and i fall onto the saw it cuts my leg. It was fine then dad remade it and i was super stable we found these plant seeds we planted them because we cut the rest down max dug them and put the in with the tree stumps used them as seats.we find these weird mushrooms we wonder if we can eat them we get my dad grabs the shiny sharp spoon he cuts it and takes a bit. it was like hes hasn't eaten in a couple of day then i think he hasn't eaten in days. everybody has a bit then i go on look out and i yell cat cat cat cat everybody comes and there's no cat there i was on look out at night i yell cat cat cat cat again then dad comes out and looks there's still no cat. in the morning i wake up and look out and i thought i'd be funny and wake everybody up by yelling cat so i scream cat cat cat then they wake up and run to me again there's no cat. we went swimming i look at the bottom of the pond. there was a turtle i grab it. when we were swimming i felt a bit of water on my head all of a sudden it pours down with rain i run with the turtle into the hut dad made i go on lookout with the turtle my feathers ar glowing i fly up into the sky i look at this big grey fur ball coming at me i yell cat cat there's a cat for real this time nobody comes it gets closer and closer i yell it again. it jumps up at me it knocks the tree over and every body looks and it is a cat they fight it off and the cat runs off and i never lied again.

the end........ =this is another story we wrote=

Shadows quivered on the wall as the candle flickered, then fizzled to nothing. The whole ship just went black as massive 40 foot waves splashed up against the ship. as they splashed i was shivering cold everybody was trying to keep calm as captain titanium and i tried to find the flint to light the candle again. As he's looking he fells something dripping on his head. The fisherman yell it's raining captain. he quickly climb's up the ladder and horrified to see that theres holes in the side of the ship. waters poring on to the ship it could be minutes until the ship splits and sinks. the fisherman said we've hit an iceberg the captain turns around and sees another one he runs to the front of the the ship were is said ss hammerhead and turns the 20 inche wheel and spins it.the ship slowly turns. the crew mates run up and say arr what you doing mate were heading for the iceberg we notice we see the shore line and forget about turning it and get every body up the ladder.Then all i hear is everybody screaming were going down.

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Grande','Lucida Sans',Verdana,Arial,sans-serif; text-align: left;">As i wake up im on the shore little waves hitting me i cough up lots of water. When i stand up im horrified to see my old friends and crew. lying there i run to captain he has the flint in his hand i shake him no hes not waking up i say i keep shaking him he didn't wake up who is gonna direct us and tell us what to do i say to my self. i hear well be fine we've done it before i turn around its my old captain, captain no leg. me and captain no leg look out to see and theres a ship. captain says run they no were still alive. i say thats no a ship its and iceberg it captain hives and we run far far away as we are running i say we crashed into that tho he reply's he thought it was me as we run we hear a bang bang bang and look back and its that iceberg. its sinking i see people jumping. it is a ship i say to myself. Then captain falls into a trap and he yells run now. I run as fast as i can and i find a dingy and float of to sea.